New song I wrote, tell me what you think.
Take Back Yesterday
(verse 1)
the indescribable feeling of regret clings to my soul
right now I feel that I dont deserve you anymore
never in my life have I felt like this before
I’m crying from the words I said, leave me on the floor
(chours )
I want to exisit no longer
I thought I could’ve been stronger
I want to take back yesterday
and throw it far away…
(verse 2)
the evolution of the revolution of my mind, is blind
the empty scilence of my soul, lets me know, I’m searching but I wont find
your blameless and I am nameless to you right now
I cant believe what I made this into, bury me in the ground
(chours)
I want to exisit no longer
I thought I could’ve been stronger
I want to take back yesterday
and throw it far away…
(bridge)
jeapordizing the one thing that I love
has insanity taken over everything I’m made of?
I cannot live with myself, with the mistakes that I made
without you my very being would fade…
(chours)
I want to exisit no longer
I thought I could’ve been stronger
I want to take back yesterday
and throw it far away…
snazzy very snazzy song might be a hit..
very well done. ohh no man.. the moffats are the baking music. try it sometime.
Hmmm, maybe I’ll give it a go next time I’m making KD!
nice man. has a very dashboard feel to it. i like it.
come to think of it… verse two and some of the chorus, has the same type of rhyme scheme as “vindicated” heh heh.
Aww yay will be be singing this one?? with justin in my basement! i promise i wont cough~
thatss really good brandon!
oh I so deleted that comment!!! you must buy it from me!!!actually, you don’t have to, I will just return it and get my $21.71 back! I was trying to give you a deal…..But it’s TOO LATE!!!
hey are you going to come to our hosue concert? i know your always cool but you would be even cooler if you came.
Thats really good. Two thumbs up.
very “deep” lol very good brandon! *clap* you could be so famous lol ttyl! xoxoAshyxoxo
Well, it is a good song, very well thought out, but it sounds kinda suicidal. Are you feeling ok brando buddy?
aww Brandon.. 🙂 i love youu
House concert on Sat….10 dollars….for Canadian music week…we need to raise money or we cannot go…..everyone come….free food that we baked ourselves….moffats are great baking music….yep yep they are
i liiike spider man.
I like spiderman to, isnt that interesting? Cant make the concert, I’ll be in kamloops playing basketball all weekend. I would’ve loved to go though. Thanks for the commentos guys. Hannah, I love you to. :b